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PostSubject: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Tue Jun 21, 2011 10:17 am

>plan to make lightningwater jutsu
>think storm is like thunderstorms
>realise it's WHAT I MADE
>FFFFFFFFF
Anyway.

Name - Ranton
History - Storm Release users are famous among Kumogakure. They are among the most common clan there, and they are renowned across the world for their pinpoint, high-power attacks. By combining Water and Lightning, they can form laser-like beams, directing them to attack and defend swiftly. The might of Ranton is one of the reasons Kumogakure was regarded as one of the strongest hidden villages.
Kekkei Genkai - Storm Release (Water+Lightning Fusion)
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Clan Jutsus

Name - Ranton: Laser Bolt
Type - Nin
Rank - C
Element - Storm
Description - The user fires a sphere-like blast of ranton chakra at the enemy.

Name - Ranton: Laser Palm
Type - Nin
Rank - B
Element - Storm
Description - The user focuses energy into their hand before firing a wide beam towards the enemy. If the user is sufficiently skilled at Chakra Control, they can direct and move the beam faster and at sharper angles.

Name - Ranton: Laser Bolt Storm
Type - Nin
Rank - B
Element - Storm
Description - The user fires off Laser Bolts in rapid succession. Requires Laser Bolt.

Name - Ranton: Laser Rain
Type - Nin
Rank - A
Element - Storm
Description - The user charges a large concentration of ranton chakra into their hands, then fires it upwards. After a short delay, the user brings their hands down, raining lasers down upon the enemy in a wide area.

Name - Ranton: Laser Tornado
Type - Nin
Rank - A
Element - Storm
Description - Creating bright beams, the user spins them around themself rapidly. This creates a powerful form of defense, immolating most projectiles. While doing this, the user cannot use other jutsu, but they can shield others with it.

Name - Ranton: Laser Circus
Type - Nin
Rank - A
Element - Storm
Description - The user creates several bright beams and shoots them at the enemy. A halo of bright energy spreads from the user's hands as this technique is activated. The beams are able to alter their direction after being shot, making it possible to strike multiple enemies with pinpoint accuracy, even bypassing hostages held in close proximity. The user can increase the number of missiles to a great amount to pin down an enemy.

Name - Ranton: RaiunkĊha
Type - Nin
Rank - S
Element - Storm
Description - The user uses Storm Release to generate a thick ring of pulsating energy around them, creating an offensive and defensive ward. They can then uses this energy to fire powerful lasers at his enemies, and as an electrified perimeter; effectively preventing their enemies from getting close.


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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Tue Jun 21, 2011 10:22 pm

Finished. Enjoy your touhou.
Want more jutsu, go make your own (or wait for me to randomly think of some)
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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Thu Jun 23, 2011 9:05 pm

only problem is with the S-rank, it seems like just a regular lightning jutsu. make the lightning blasts into laser bolts and then it makes sense
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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Thu Jun 23, 2011 9:19 pm

That one was copied from the wiki, from where Hiruko ruined ranton. Fixed now.
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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Thu Jun 23, 2011 9:32 pm

from the wiki? the only ranton jutsu on the wiki is laser circus. I don't really count anything from the movies as canon. since it was stolen for a different technique and probably altered, it probably isn't even a proper ranton jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Thu Jun 23, 2011 9:49 pm

Well then I remade it as a custom, then, un?
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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Thu Jun 23, 2011 10:03 pm

your logic is undeniable

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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:32 am

is it alright if laser bolt storm is mad a B-rank? there's already so many A-ranks and it doesn't seem as powerful
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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:37 am

Priceless moment was priceless.
Sure, move it down. Laser Rain or Laser Circus are good enough in place of it anyway.
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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:40 am

thanks Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Fri Jun 24, 2011 9:54 pm

YAY, I AM ONE OF THE POPULAR KIDS NOW
Inspiration has struck, so enjoy your jutsu that thankfully your preexisting char couldn't have upon creation.
I decided to give them japanese names unlike other ranton things, 'cus they're new. I figured kumo was like the english-speaking world, so now that they're like speaking japanese (the universal language), new jutsu would have japanese names. (That applies to the other S-rank too, probably)
BORINGNESS OVER, MORE PEWPEWPEW

Name - Ranton: Zennou Shuuha - Almighty Wave (a.k.a. Not Kamehameha)
Type - Nin
Rank - S
Element - Storm
Description - A fairly new technique for the clan, this technique was designed by a former Raikage to mimic the Tailed Beast Ball. Gathering ranton energy and forming a dense sphere, the user compresses and expels it in a large beam-like effect. The attack comes nowhere near the devastation of a tailed beast ball, but it is still vastly powerful.

As a bonus, have some added kumoness.

Name - Ranton: Seishou Ken - Energy Sword
Type - Nin
Rank - B
Element - Storm
Description - The user draws out a blade-like form of ranton energy and uses it to fight. Because of the nature of ranton chakra, the blade is easily manipulated and contorted into various shapes.

Name - Ranton: Sutansu no Kami - Stance of God
Type - Nin
Rank - A
Element - Storm
Description - The user uses Seishou Ken to attack at a distance, flinging the blade and fighting at long-range. The blade is easier controlled by making fencing motions on the spot, but sufficient chakra control can allow one to fight without motion - even though motion will enhance the speed. Requires Seishou Ken.

Name - Ranton: Kagirinai Odori - Endless Dance
Type - Nin
Rank - A
Element - Storm
Description - The user creates multiple Energy Swords and fights using them. Most people can only create 2 or 3, and even the most powerful ninja rarely exceed 4. This jutsu can be combined with Stance of God. Requires Seishou Ken.

Name - Ranton: Ranmyaku no Tsubasa - Chaotic Wings
Type - Nin
Rank - S
Element - Storm
Description - Taking ranton nintaijutsu to the ultimate level, the user draws out numerous Energy Swords all over their body, and fights with them at close range. They can maintain one or two at long range using Stance of God, but it is very difficult and they will usually have to let a few chaotic wings dissipate.


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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Mon Jun 27, 2011 7:23 pm

those would be nin, not nin+tai. the actual jutsus deal with creating chakra blades, which would be ninjutsu. even the stance of god, which is a 'fighting style' has the user controlling the blades from afar via their chakra, which would be ninjutsu. obviously having skill in taijutsu would probably make it more effective, but it wouldn't be required to learn them.
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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:01 pm

I was kind of applying the logic of "puppets=tai" in reverse.
They can be just nin, I just figured more nintaijutsu would be good 'cus it's like the thing about Kumo.
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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:04 pm

yeah but then you would need double the amount of jutsu stat points to learn them, which doesn't make sense when they really aren't all that super hard or anything... and I believe puppetry jutsus are ninjutsu anyway
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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:12 pm

I meant, like, having an S-rank puppet or whatever.
In any case, yeah, probably just nin.
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PostSubject: Re: Ranton (Kumogakure)   Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:21 pm

all approved then
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